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It was one regular day, just like everyone that i ever had...till this day.

The clouds were moving just like they should, the sun kept on doing his part and the wind outside couldn't stop. Normality was in there...except one thing, the thing that always gets my attention on every awakening, that one detail which makes the difference. Where my feelings went, my sensations??

I admit, what a dillema...anything like that ever happened to me before and i didn't know if i should panic or stayed calm. I thought the first was the right one...i still think that and probably was the certain decision to take. Anyway, passing that...i went to the bathroom and played my usual routine of the morning, even if it seemed that anything happened during that period of time. Ok, i know, i didn't tell what i did on the bathroom, specifically...but that's private!!

After any usual morning routine, i got out of house and went to school...but wait, something was missing...i knew that i should have said or done something...I KNOW, i got to say good-bye of my family, of course...i'm so forgotten!! I went back, opened the door and shout my normal good-bye thing...but no one answered back which is weird. Perhaps they got mad at me...well, i needed to got going, so i went to school anyway. But as far as i went, everything started to seem even weird...where is all the freaking people??

I didn't know, but that was a normal thing at the time...i couldn't know, it was my first time at that...but yes, as you may already thought, i freaked out, obviously. I ran so much, so that my legs started to feel...wait a second, since that morning, i couldn't feel a thing...so that was why i didn't fell the obviously tiredness neither the wind being cut by my running...what the fuck was happening??

Then, i saw someone, i remember that...i ran at her, one strange and very violent lady...i asked her if everything was ok at the weather (stupid question, now i know) but she didn't answered back the rude and mean woman. But i asked that same thing over and over at those blind people who ignored me...till some man looked at me and covered his head with some kind of black hood and waited for me. He was tall and unfriendly by his looks, wearing a cloak as long as him and got a bag with him...till this day, i don't know what that bag had and i'll ask him that right away...so, i approached and asked him:

- What is going one, why anyone answers me??
- You don't know, right?? - he answered me with that strong and powerful voice of him which has a very distinguished breath.

I answered then:

- Well, of course not...so, why i can't feel since this morning or whatever and no one answers me??

He said, very calm and taking his hood down:

- Because you're dead since two days ago and only now you accepted that.
©2008-2009 ~andoore
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Author's Comments

I just thought of this and since some many people wanted that i write something, i did the thing...lets see what i get with this!! :D

By the way, totally fiction but scary nontheless!! :nod: And i know it should be better, but for the time being, it's my best, sorry!! :D

And, if you don't know why i didn't saw yet or deviations, comments, whatever is because i've my hands full of work right now and other things...so, please, be gentle with me!! :)

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:iconkasshuofdeath:
Thought provoking to say the least :)

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Everyone wants something to believe in
:iconandoore:
Well, i thought in this the other day and i loose some time ploting the all theory...yeah, i guess it's kinda provocative, but what gets people's minds his the best, i think!! :nod:

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i don't try to be a specialist, just a guy who makes some drawings and takes photos!!
see also ~zebs15, ~odraconiandevil2, ~rbcs095 and ~love-andcoffee, here at DA!! :D
:iconkasshuofdeath:
It makes me wonder could the dearly departed still roam thinking they are still among the living . You know really deep in denial

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Everyone wants something to believe in
:iconandoore:
I think some of them know for the beginning that the end and the beginning have started at the same time, but some of them might me lost...who knows how many of them are still lost since the first departed soul??

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i don't try to be a specialist, just a guy who makes some drawings and takes photos!!
see also ~zebs15, ~odraconiandevil2, ~rbcs095 and ~love-andcoffee, here at DA!! :D
:iconkasshuofdeath:
Yep who knows

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Everyone wants something to believe in
:iconandoore:
I think i'll take some of his idea for one of my stories...well, fell free to use this if you want too!! :D

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i don't try to be a specialist, just a guy who makes some drawings and takes photos!!
see also ~zebs15, ~odraconiandevil2, ~rbcs095 and ~love-andcoffee, here at DA!! :D
:iconkasshuofdeath:
Its your story so Ill leave you to it but thanks for the offer :)

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Everyone wants something to believe in
:iconandoore:
ok then, you know, when you want to use this somehow, if that happens, just tell me, man!! :D

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i don't try to be a specialist, just a guy who makes some drawings and takes photos!!
see also ~zebs15, ~odraconiandevil2, ~rbcs095 and ~love-andcoffee, here at DA!! :D
:iconkasshuofdeath:
Ill keep that in mind

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Everyone wants something to believe in
:iconandoore:
ok then, dude!! =p ;p

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i don't try to be a specialist, just a guy who makes some drawings and takes photos!!
see also ~zebs15, ~odraconiandevil2, ~rbcs095 and ~love-andcoffee, here at DA!! :D

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